Friday, December 18, 2015

Reverse Metamorphosis (Open Genre)

Ezra Johnson
Open Genera Project
The Reverse Metamorphosis
One morning, Rufus woke up all by himself. Normally the pheromones from his neighbors awoke him, but today he just woke up. He sniffed the air to catch a waft of the morning pheromones. Nothing. “That’s odd,” Rufus thought to himself. He tried again in vain. Rufus opened his eyes, but everything was all wrong. He looked around to the back corner where he kept his secret possessions collected while foraging. Rufus looked in the pile for his new shiny bead – Rufus had found it in the trash pile a few days ago while foraging for food—but his eyes couldn’t focus on anything. He was determined to make sure it was there, so he began to move towards the pile. As he began to move Rufus realized something was amiss. He looked behind him to make sure all six of his legs were in working order, but instead of six thin legs he found just two soft, thick, pink legs. He thought that maybe his vison was acting up again, so he tried to move them. The right one twitched but then went limp again. Confused, Rufus looked down and found that he had two smaller legs close to his head. These legs were different. They had floppy things at the end which each spawned 5 tiny stick-like appendages.
Rufus’ thoughts returned to work when he heard scurrying in a nearby tunnel. “If I’m late one more time Archibald will kill me!” Archibald was head-forager, specially bred for administrative roles. Rufus resented Archibald. While Rufus was out foraging all Archibald did was emit anger pheromones and scare the foragers. Rufus pondered his options. He knew Archibald would come scurrying by with his anger pheromone completely maxed out if he didn’t get up soon. He willed his new form to move, but all he got was a lot of twitching. “Maybe if I emit some help pheromone, Zoey will come by and help me get to work,” Rufus thought. He tried, but felt no odor being emitted. Rufus was at a loss. He couldn’t call for help or move his new body. “I guess I will just wait for Archibald to come by,” he thought.
As he was waiting, Rufus couldn’t help but fall asleep. When he awoke, he found Archibald standing above him his antennae in a flurry over his body. He sniffed the air. “No anger pheromone,” he thought “Why is he not emitting any anger pheromone?” Again Rufus made an attempt to communicate. However, in this attempt rather than emitting a pheromone he felt an odd sensation inside of his neck. It was a small vibration that reverberated through his body. Not only did it reverberate but it made an audible sound. Archibald was still feeling around when Rufus accidently did this, and it caused him to scurry away in panic and fear. Rufus could hear his scurrying get further and further away. He resolved to just wait for him to come back.
After a while, Rufus could hear lots of scurrying, it got louder and louder until seven workers came and approached him. Rufus attempted to communicate again, but it only sent the entire group of workers cowering away. Rufus made no more attempts to move or communicate while the workers picked him up and carried him away. He had only visited a few sections of the colony. It just wasn’t his business to explore the nursery or the workers area. All the same, Rufus was being carried through unknown territory and he couldn’t help but be curious. He wondered where they were taking him. “Maybe this happens often and they have a special food to fix it,” he thought optimistically. The tunnels seemed to go on forever and he began to wonder about the life ahead of him. “There must be some way that I can go back to work,” he thought. “I want to find more shiny beads to add to my collection.”
The tunnel slowly got wider and emerged into a large room with a dark endless pit in the center. “Oh, no!” he thought. He began to struggle – or attempt to struggle—with the workers. He sensed that he was unnerving them with his small movements, so he began to vocalize and squirm as much as he could. Rufus could smell the stench. Every single dead member of the colony was dumped into this pit. Every corpse was thrown down to rot and decompose. “They think I am dead!” he thought as he wrestled free of their grip. Rufus fell to the ground. His soft pink skin was punctured by the sharp rocks he fell on. Rufus felt a hot gooey liquid begin to flow over his body. He didn’t know what the liquid was and he realized that his soft pink skin was useless for protection. After he fell the workers, who were past uncomfortable, quickly rolled Rufus’ limp body into the pit.
When Rufus woke up he was ready to put the nightmare behind him and go to work. Except when he opened his eyes he saw nothing but utter darkness. He realized that it wasn’t a dream. He really did transform into a soft pink useless monster. He took a whiff of the air. It was so putrid and repulsive that he could hardly breathe. After collecting himself, he discovered that he had some control over his large lower legs and smaller upper legs. It was enough that he was able to scoot himself over to the wall through all the slimy corpses. After feeling around with his new appendages, Rufus realized that he had grown to about twice the size as he when he first got thrown down. His body felt incomplete, like it needed to stretch out and expand. There was nothing Rufus could do but sit and wait for something to happen.
As Rufus’ form began to grow, the pain from the wound returned. One day he was able to muster enough effort to reach around and feel around for the wound. As soon as he touched it his entire body shuddered. The wound had gotten worse. Rufus felt dizzy and went back to sleep. With each day Rufus grew larger and larger, but so did the wound. One day it was only a small spot on his back. A week or so later the wound had grown so large that it overwhelmed his entire back. Rufus tried to move as little as possible. He began to drift off to sleep more and more often. He slept for longer periods of time and soon forgot how long he had been in the pit. Sleep became the only thing that comforted him.
After about a month Archibald came to check up on him. Archibald emitted so much panic pheromone when he saw the giant pink skinned monster that the whole colony stopped to come see. Archibald had an idea, rather than letting all this soft decomposing flesh go to waste he would use it. He commanded the workers to start to dig a hole in the center of the soft-fleshed thing. “That’s a human,” one of the workers responded. “I have seen them up on the surface.” Archibald emitted a little anger pheromone “I don’t care what it is,” he said “Just make a hole in the center!” Archibald would use the new hollowed out area as a nursery. “It has all the perfect conditions,” he thought. “It’s warm, damp, and the larvae can just feed on the flesh rather than eating the foraged food.” After about a month the nursery inside of Rufus was ready. It was as perfect as Archibald had envisioned. Archibald was promoted in the social ranks of the colony and everyone prospered.







Monday, December 14, 2015

Craziness and the Past

Let's set aside Milkman for a moment and just look at the people in his life. Macon, Ruth, Pilate, Hagar, Guitar; they all have some insanely crazy story. Milkman is stuck with these people and can't seem to break away. Early in the book we established that Milkman was stuck in the past. On the Sunday drives Milkman was forced to look backwards (symbolizing the past). We see the same dynamic at the end of this novel. As an adult Milkman is driven to explore his past so that he can uncover and get rid of all the craziness in his life.
 
Even before Milkman was born he was surrounded by his crazy parents. Ruth, who is already crazy because Macon refused to sleep in the same bed with her, goes to Pilate and asks for a potion or drug that will allow her to sleep with him again. Pilate agrees and Ruth becomes pregnant. Macon, who is totally confused as to why Ruth is pregnant, tries to make her abort the baby. I'm pretty sure normal people don't ask their sister-in-law for a potion to have another child. On top of this Ruth is crazy to start with, she had a "different" relationship with her father that made us all super uncomfortable. Macon refuses to love Ruth because she had this odd relationship, but this refusal only causes more problems later on. 

Macon is not with out his own set of problems. His past seems to be a mystery for the most part. Milkman knows that he murdered a man in a cave when he thought the man was a ghost. Again this is totally insane, but with all the other insanity going on we sort of pass this an average thing people in this novel would do. 

Now Hagar's type of craziness is a little different than the others because it was provoked. A good portion of the fault is assigned to Milkman. He broke off a lifetime relationship with just a letter and a wad of cash. However, there ways to communicate that do not involve killing your lifelong friend. 

Milkman leaves his home to "find the lost gold", and at first it seems like it will just be another errand for his father. His whole life his father would tell him to do something, and the naive young little boy would go off to complete his father's work. However, part way through his journey Milkman becomes his own man. He realizes the reasons people dislike him, and the reason why Hagar is trying to kill him. The book becomes a coming-of-age novel. I think we see Milkman make the first steps to becoming his own person and escaping all the craziness that has been placed around him. Milkman has journeyed away from all the craziness and is now discovering and uncovering his past. Instead of this quest for gold Milkman's motive switches to finding out about his family. His ancestors seem to be heroic and well-respected, almost the opposite of his current family. Milkman is driven away from the craziness so that he can embrace his past and finally get rid of the insanity that surrounds him. (I haven't finished the book yet, but I guess I will find out if Milkman really does "solve the puzzle" of his past and get away from all the crazy people in his life.)